An informal letter which is OK for NB1

Hi Antonio!

As you know, I'm in London right now! I came here last Tuesday by plane and it took me just two hours to arrive here. I'm enjoying so much and having a really good time here. London is such a wonderful city.
By the way, I'm currently living in Marta's house just for a few days. Do you remember her? She is an old friend that I know since I was a child. She has a boyfriend and both live together, however he is at the moment studying in Oxford.

Now, we are taking a seat in a turkish restaurant near the London Eye. I can't wait! I'm so hungry... London is a huge city and it is always needed to take a break and decide what you would really like to do later. There is not enough time to spend here... This city is magical, it is easy to find several places that you would not imagine they took place here. If we came together, I would show you everything...

However, the weather is quite wet. Since I arrived here, the rain never ends. Two days ago, It stopped rainning and kids could get out home to play football and basketball. It is amazing how happy can they feel in this little moments.

Yesterday, in the afternoon we went to The Buckingham Palace. We ate something in a Japanese restaurant and one hour later we went to Starbucks to taste a delicious coffee... yummy!

I don't know what to do today, but I'll probably go with Marta to a new famous disco and keep dancing all night long... I love London, but I miss you so much!

See you son,

M. J.



SIMPLE ENGLISH (Just correcting all mistakes I've found and simplifying structures)

Hi Antonio!

As you know, I'm in London. I came here last Tuesday, I got a plane and arrived here two hours later. I'm having a very good time, I'm enjoying my time so much. I'm staying at Marta's house. Do you remember her? She's an old classmate that I know since we were children. Marta lives with his boyfriend, but now he's in Oxford.
In this moment, we're near the London Eye, in a restaurant waiting for our dinner.
This city is magical, it keeps many secret places that finally we have found. Next time you come here, I'll show you...
But the weather is very wet. Since we have arrived here, the rain never ends. Two days ago the rain stopped and kids went to the streets to play football and basketball.
Yesterday, in the afternoon, we went to The Buckingham Palace. We ate in a Japanese restaurant and one hour later we took a coffee in Starbuck.
My plan for today is going to a new famous disco to dance all night... I love London!!

See you soon!

M.J.



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